Comments on: Chapter One – Page Twenty-Three

By: J-dawg

J-dawg — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 03:19:46 +0000

Way to pack in the emotion!

By: replacement sparrow

replacement sparrow — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 01:50:29 +0000

Mostly I just wanted to draw a kitty-faced Ed. Do you need a reason to do this sort of thing?

Also, maybe Hrae is a little bit ax crazy. ;)

By: Rachel

Rachel — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 01:36:02 +0000

What are you saying? XD

By: replacement sparrow

replacement sparrow — Thu, 19 Nov 2009 00:01:05 +0000

http://www.windless.org/images/a_resemblance.png ?

By: Rachel

Rachel — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 22:14:23 +0000

Thank you! :) I’m thrilled to hear you’re enjoying it!

And you’re right about the number of characters; it’ll be an interesting balancing act to spend enough time getting to know them, and yet also let the story move. (I’m optimistic about it, though! One of my creative touchstones is Haibane Renmei, which introduces six of its main characters in the very first episode and yet beautifully manages to keep them all distinct. So I at least know it’s possible. :) )

By: wright

wright — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 18:01:55 +0000

Love the writing and art: both direct and deceptively simple. The only really awkward bit is the eight (nine?) sisters; introducing them and establishing all of them as characters is going to take awhile.

But consider me hooked.

By: replacement sparrow

replacement sparrow — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 08:55:32 +0000

;*> *worry worry*