Love the writing and art: both direct and deceptively simple. The only really awkward bit is the eight (nine?) sisters; introducing them and establishing all of them as characters is going to take awhile.
Thank you! :) I’m thrilled to hear you’re enjoying it!
And you’re right about the number of characters; it’ll be an interesting balancing act to spend enough time getting to know them, and yet also let the story move. (I’m optimistic about it, though! One of my creative touchstones is Haibane Renmei, which introduces six of its main characters in the very first episode and yet beautifully manages to keep them all distinct. So I at least know it’s possible. :) )
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;*> *worry worry*
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Love the writing and art: both direct and deceptively simple. The only really awkward bit is the eight (nine?) sisters; introducing them and establishing all of them as characters is going to take awhile.
But consider me hooked.
Rachel
Thank you! :) I’m thrilled to hear you’re enjoying it!
And you’re right about the number of characters; it’ll be an interesting balancing act to spend enough time getting to know them, and yet also let the story move. (I’m optimistic about it, though! One of my creative touchstones is Haibane Renmei, which introduces six of its main characters in the very first episode and yet beautifully manages to keep them all distinct. So I at least know it’s possible. :) )
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Rachel
What are you saying? XD
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Mostly I just wanted to draw a kitty-faced Ed. Do you need a reason to do this sort of thing?
Also, maybe Hrae is a little bit ax crazy. ;)
J-dawg
Way to pack in the emotion!