Published On: September 11, 2010

9 thoughts on “Chapter Three – Page Sixteen

  1. Not the most helpful informant in the world.

  2. replacement sparrow

    Is the uncle’s name really “chicken”? ~ <3 <3 <3 Hopefully he isn't just being called by his trade.

    1. Hee hee hee hee hee hee. Yes, his name is Pollo, but with the Ls pronounced. Originally I wanted to name him Pollock, because I decided he looks like a bony blond version of Jackson Pollock, but I wasn’t 100% sure about it. When Michael suggested this shortening it was too hilarious not to go for.

  3. He sounds like the type of informant who remembers better when someone buys him a tankard of ale. ^^

    1. Normally I’d think so too, but I rather doubt Sepia actually gave him any of that information.

      So now will Jaron go and investigate the mysterious pretty girl who was staring at him, and end up causing her a great deal of trouble?

  4. ooh, He’s beginning to notice girls, eh? Absolutely guaranteed he’s going to cause Sepia trouble, but what kind?

    1. I doubt that Sepia would be interested in that kind of trouble. After all, how heartbreaking would it be for her to outlive her great grandchildren? How would her husband react to being with someone who doesn’t age?

  5. Wow! That was cool seeing the draft version and the final version. Micheal’s got talent!

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